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Posts: 913 (10/22/08 22:09:42)
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A story I'm working on. I want some feed back so please let me know what I can do better, any grammar changes that need to be done, spelling, or even
compliments would be great. Most of all though let me know what you thought about it and weather or not I should continue this story.
Prologue and Chapter One. 
Last Edited By: TF Solardive 11/04/08 21:33:27.
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Posts: 51 (10/25/08 00:40:38) |
Hmm... not bad, though you'll have to change the epilogue to prologue. An epilogue is the ending of a story, not the beginning. XD
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TF Solardive |
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Posts: 923 (11/04/08 21:31:16)
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... Blast your right.
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