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TF Solardive |
A new story? |
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Ok, so some people have read the story I am reffering to. Anyways, this is just an interest poll to see what people think. I wrote a story called
"Mechanical Eyes" a while back ago and I wanted to know if anyone here is interested in reading it. Make a vote in the poll and we can go from
there.
How interested are you in reading a story I wrote some time ago? (Total Votes: 3) - ClosedVery interested. (1 / 33.3%) Kinda Interested. (2 / 66.7%) Meh. (0 / 0%) Not really interested. (0 / 0%) Forget it. (0 / 0%) |
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LoC Seph Blade |
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perhpas you could give us a teaser? perhaps the setting and perhaps the onset goals?
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LoC Seph Blade wrote: ^ |
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TF Solardive |
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You asked for it... here is your teaser:
Epiloge It happened about a year ago, the worst riot in the history of the 22nd century. A corperation named CYBERTRONICS had created the worlds first cyborg. The brain of a human being had been implanted into a fully functional human-shaped robot. It acted like a human-being but far surpassed the physical atributes of any modern man. The difference between mankind and robots was getting remarkably hard to determine. A protestent group calling themsleves the "Free Thinking Man" demanded that this abomination be destroyed and future projects be abandoned. Of course the corperation ignored their threats and continued their work. About a month later, on July 4th of 2078, all hell broke loose on the corperation. The peacefull group that was the "Free Thinking Man" lashed out with terrorist force and renamed them selves the "Brothers Against Mechanical Aadvancment". Brandishing sub-machineguns, AK-47's, and C4 demolision charges, the group entered the headquarters of CYBERTRONICS and mercisly killed every security guard, inoccent bystandard and scientist without hesitation; there where all deemed as criminals and shot down for it. Innocent blood spilled on the floors and splattered on the walls as bullets ripped through soft flesh and exploded on the surrounding area. The security gaurds at the entrance were the most mutilated, legs were torn off due to grenades thrown into their perimiter and their heads turned to paste from semi-automatic fire to their scorched-screaming cranials. The group searched the building for the cyborg and ripped him appart, planted C4 demolition charges in key areas of the buildings structure and brought the building down. It was the worst riot in history after that; people piliging stores, raiding homes and murders happening all over the city of New York. The NYPD finally got the condition under control after a week of rioting and new rules where set. A curfue for all citizens after 11 pm was set, the government controlled the censorship and forced all media through strict material inspections. The world fell apart as we new it for 2 whole years. However, a single scientist remained from the horrible insident. This is his story of life after the riot...
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TF Solardive |
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BTW, in case you were wondering. This is not an RP, this is a story I have been working on. It's only one chapter long, two for the mature readers, and
is just something I want others opinions on.
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LoC Seph Blade |
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lol ohhhh. ok then this post is definitly in the wrong forum man. Im gonna move it over to the sotry only forum. I and others i velive thought this was a
advert for a gruop fic man. however fyi if by depending on what you mena by mature you may need to limit it to one chapter as I want the loc to remain friendly
for all ages.
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TF Solardive |
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Understand able... I could make it so if anyone who is interested in the second chapter can PM me and I can send them the link so they can read it without
posting it on the site.
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LoC Seph Blade |
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sounds like a plan
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TF Solardive |
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Well it doesn't look like that many people were interested in it... I guess I'll just post a link in the creation matrix. Seph if I'm in the wrong
here you can tell me and I'll fix it but I'm just going to post a link to it in the creation matrix.
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